Feedback on our pitch

"Clear up the narrative"- As a group we are going the clear the narrative so that everybody can understand the plot from the opening sequence.

"Clear up location"- We need to decide on a final location for our thriller opening sequence, we thought about shooting around addenbrookes hospital. but this would be difficult as they may have filming restrictions. If we do not film at addenbrookes then we are going to film elsewhere in a tall building to portray the intimidation and stalking that is a key part of our opening sequence.

"How will the dead body be presented?"- The way in which we will show the dead body is going to be a close up shot of the body and then a long shot from a different angle in silence to show loneliness.

"How will you get to the top of a building?"- We are going to film from the top of a building to portray intimidation and fear. we will film from the roof of a car park as it would be easily accessible.