Wednesday 2 March 2011

Peer Feedback on Rough Cut

When another group looked at our work,  and they gave us feedback on a rough cut of our opening sequence. they said :


Shots: POV, close-up and handheld.
Mise-en-scene: Lighting: low and natural.

                         Props: poles, phone.

                         Costume: casual, student.
                         Location: field.


Editing transitions: jump cut. Sound is all diagetic.


Improvements:
- Sound effects.
- More thriller conventions.

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